Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age, for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that the best way to strengthen traffic safety is to impose a higher age limit for operating personal vehicles like cars and motorbikes. However, I disagree with this school of thought given that there is a more effective way to ensure safety on the roads.
One might argue that it would be best to increase the minimum driving age to prevent young people from operating vehicles. This is because a considerable proportion of road accidents are indeed caused by young people’s reckless driving behaviours. For example, youngsters are more likely to drive under the influence or speed to impress their peers. Therefore, raising the required age for driving would ensure that individuals are mature enough before they are able to drive, hence reduced road accidents.
However, I believe that a better way to ensure road safety is to raise the difficulty of driving tests in the first place. This is because road accidents are largely attributable to insufficient knowledge about traffic laws and poor driving skills, rather than the drivers’ ages themselves. Thus, the authorities ought to make driving tests harder to ascertain that only competent drivers pass them. In addition, drivers should be required to retake the test every two years so that they can be introduced to new laws and tested on their abilities. If these policies are strictly enforced, heightening the minimum driving age will be rendered unnecessary.
In summary, while I acknowledge that raising the age limit for driving and riding motorbikes may help to diminish road accidents, it is my conviction that making driving tests more difficult and frequent is a better approach to ensure traffic safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in summary, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19202898551 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6969448163 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2664509049 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282285525299 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102732391137 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570282496157 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170102345491 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431492549512 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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