These days yo children spend alot time usi ng computer ,tablets and smartphones.some people think that interoducing to technology at a young age is beneficial other believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Technology act as a steping stone to uplift the standard of people life .Most of younger spend their precious time on technology such as using computer,tablet and smartphones,Few masses think that implement kinder at young is benificl. Other think that they playing traditional games is more benefical.i will discuss both views in following pharagraphs
To embark with , there are manyfold points to sore up my views,first and foremost,technology is stunning way to get information because when anyone has a problems with the help of it they can tackle his problems and sought out his quarry .For example,when learner have difficulties in their study they can use internet and get idea against problems with the help of this they can improve their academic score.Moreover,technology provide information about all around the world and cultures when individuals want to know about other traditions with the help of internet they can collect information related to technology not only mete out information but also good source of entertainment.
Nevertheless,traditional games have their own significance but nowadays some people forget their tradition and follow western games when we play traditional games than we can save our culture because when masses have information about that games than they can forward their knowledge next generation and children can not distract their culture .Apart from that,games are play vital role in people life because children know that games adopt their parents then they play regularly because they respect their elder may they crazy about it when they play games they hale and hearty along with if one can best in one game they promote tha game and get name and fame .
To sum with, both ways are equally importance .Therefore.in my point of view technology is good thing to introduceing in young once life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26101694915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21846073404 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 280.708033373 49.4020404114 568% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 388.0 106.682146367 364% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.75 20.7667163134 355% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196788533642 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129545225212 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373763110504 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146807553434 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10304889763 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.2 13.0946893788 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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