Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?
During these years where countries have been governed by various types of authorities, living in an ideal society has been like a fantasy for many people. Although some have thought governments could not be completely perfect, they should have several elements in order to provide the condition to achieve this citizen’s dream. Not only is this essay going to talk about the important factor of having a perfect society based on writer’s opinion, but also the way which people could reach this kind of the community will be mentioned.
First of all, an ideal society has had few important elements but I myself believe the most important one is solidarity between people. In any country, there would be diverse group of individuals with various beliefs and thoughts. In spite of these differences, which has been believed as the beauty of perfect society, if humans cannot be together even with their different opinions, they would not have a dreamy society. This leads people not only have an opportunity to like one another, but also it has acted as a training lesson in order to respect others. For example, when a high proportion of people have chosen one person to be their guider or president, the rest of them do not have a right not to obey the rules just because they cannot accept others choice.
Additionally, human-beings have always wanted to know how they can have this dreamy society which has been a difficult decision through these years. I think the way people could have an ideal community is being aware of their governments. Also, realizing their abilities and power has pursued them to choose the right group of authorities. For instance, voting for wrong ones through history, have made lots of countries to go backward and lose their degree against the world. Consequently, the most significant factor, which was mentioned, has led populations to reach their dreamy societies.
In conclusion, most of the people have always wanted to live in supreme countries which have powerful authorities. Even though a dreamy society has had few factors, unity has been thought as the most substantial factor by the essay’s writer. That factor has helped people to reach that community by picking worthy people with great qualities as their government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05305039788 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60580076701 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525198938992 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4683081593 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359432187555 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121136218156 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654323516115 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238343024863 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424108447985 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.