Today, anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?
With the advent of advanced technology, especially smartphone helps human easily in touch for both work and privacy anywhere and anytime. However, whether it is recommended to always carry and be busy with the phone.
As respect to phone's advantages, there is no doubt that in such an emergency case, phone truly stands out as the most useful tool ever. As it can be seen from the fact that, phone breaks the barrier of geographical distance. For examples, when someone is the founder of the company, going on a business trip would be on a daily basic. In that situation, for some sudden events but having a vital influence on the company's performance, it needs being asked for the permission via the phone. Moreover, as a regular person, phone also plays an important role in human life. If someday their relatives are being in an accident, just by a phone call, the problem could be fixed immediately. Another noticable point is that people could save a remarkable amount of time and effort by making a phone call. For instance, with the case of marketing research, collecting data seems not to be an exhausting job anymore since the telesaleman only sits in the room and call to the customers from the available detailed list. The productivity have been astonishingly increased significantly when they needn't go out but still reach many potential clients.
Regarding the drawbacks, the first one would be that makes people become distant. To make it clear, the practice of overusing phone could lead to the lack of face-to-face communication. From that point, there is no love in the air anymore. Furthermore, such as the boss or the customers may receive the false information as they can not see the facial expression to navigate the truth behind the story they were told. This would end up with a regreting decision for them.
In conclusion, having phone to make life easily is reasonably accepted but the main thing is that people should acknowledge the frequency of using it in order to have a healthy lifestyle.
- Today, anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society? 84
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88405797101 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74107897873 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605797101449 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2210552803 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133886868583 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415241728927 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029021277266 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776761949538 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297170730068 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.