Today consumers are facing an increasing amount of advertising from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Although over the past decade, the advertising service has boomed rapidly throughout the world, the issue as to whether that advertising from commercial services have effects on audiences or not remains controversial. In my opinion, public advertising not ony impact on commodity perception of consumer, but also change the consumer behaviour of them.
Firstly, many may argue that advertisings just give them options about commodities and can not influence on their decisions. This argument could be true in some extent. However, they are ignorant that facing a bombard regularly from various advertisements have hit strongly on consumer demands of most custommer. In the long term, these commercials, which is able to change the public attitude or even mould their thought by disseminate information purposely, can increasing profit for companies, which have favorite model advertisements of cosumers. A telling example is advertisings on social networks. Habits and the changable consumer behaviour of customer can decide appearance of avertisements on their social networks page and orientate what they purchase in the future.
Secondly, some economists could argue that advertisements is a revolution of media industry, and they help other industry develop and approach to customers easily. The development of advertising service has great contributation to the wealthy of good-producing industry which bring potential profit to economy of each country. However, the accelerated attack of advertisements in the same type mechanise from distinguish companies will stand customers in the disadvantage stead or even consumerscan be trapped in untrue advertisements. For example, image editing technologies applied to comercial advertisements nowaday have intensive effect on selections of most customers because of comparison between the look of goods.
In conclusion, advertisements can help consumers approach and understand to commodities easily and conveniently. However, raising awareness in purchase and checking product information accurately will prevent customers from increasing rapidly of comercials in currently life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...rapidly throughout the world, the issue as to whether that advertising from commercial servic...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...consumer behaviour of them. Firstly, many may argue that advertisings just give them ...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... However, they are ignorant that facing a bombard regularly from various advertisements h...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsumer behaviour of customer can decide appearance of avertisements on their soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98045602606 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30072396974 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1174082671 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288057269944 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961625473136 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412183413938 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170255987295 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638215232694 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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