Today, the high sales o f popular consumer goods reflect the power o f advertising and not the real needs o f the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree!
With substantial uses of advertisements, plenty of brands have caught the attention of the public, and benefitted significantly from it without doubt. There is a prevailing view that the popularity of these products doesn’t represent what the society really needs but merely the advertisement’s influence. I strongly disagree with this view.
The high sales of these goods won’t be possible to exist only with numerous advertisements if they can’t satisfy public needs. In other words, it’s not likely for customers to spend money on useless products even though their advertisements are attractive. This might boost the sales in short run by strongly advertising, but it wouldn’t be persistent after customers realize that these products can’t fulfill daily needs.
In addition, powerful advertising needs to be combined with excellent product in order to generate soaring revenue. If a firm never markets its products and people don’t even know these goods, how could it be possible to achieve high sales, even though these products can effectively satisfy real needs of the society. Therefore, advertising helps gain the popularity and used goods make it possible to persist the sales, leading to a great performance of selling for the long term.
In a word, I believe popularity of consumer goods is hard to be obtained without taking advantage of the power of advertising as well as focusing on the product itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, well, in addition, in short, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37444933921 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96142077429 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9559076263 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20232579284 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836202053349 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574740504466 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126917463128 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178117476186 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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