Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do you advantages of new development outweigh the disadvantages?
As a result of the advancement of technology, online business meetings and training have become commonplace. However, the issue of whether this trend is advantageous rather than disadvantageous or not is still vigorously discussed. From my perspective, both proponents and opponents of this development have reasonable arguments which should be taken into careful consideration. In this essay, I will elaborate on both views before giving my outlook.
On the one hand, detractors often cite the job-related quality to justify their protest against the popularity of computer-based business meetings and training. It is undeniable that the extent of the efficiency of these meetings and training greatly depends on the quality of used technological gadgets. That these online meetings and vocational training may be fraught with technological problems can give rise to a reduction in business productivity. For example, if participants do not have high-quality devices like a crystal-clear camera or good sound system, they will not be able to comprehend what their co-workers are discussing and raise their voices.
However, advocates of this trend claim that this problem can be solved owing to the flexibility created by internet-based conferences and job training. Since most of the workers nowadays possess necessary equipment like a computer, a mobile phone, and a microphone at their residence, online professional conferences and training can be held whenever the technology-related issues are already tackled. Moreover, online business meetings and training can help participants reduce their commuting time and budget allocation for transportation. Statistics have shown that the average commute time for a US worker is 1 hour and 38 minutes per day and the average cost per month is $160 which means the workers in the US are paying the equivalent of 21% of their mortgage to commute to work. Thus, if businesses take advantage of online meetings and training, their employees can save more time and money for their recreation.
On balance, I agree that though business meetings and training taking place online can meet some technological problems, they can be handled and therefore are dominated by the advantages of these conferences and training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50574712644 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22298522636 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.688827636 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250992331731 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982443909968 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842294998328 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169049279464 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400644671812 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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