Today large shopping centers and supermarkets are more common than small local shops Is this a negative or positive development

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Today large shopping centers and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development?

It is a well-known fact that the development of shopping malls and supermarkets attract more interests from people than conventional local shops. I enunciate that this trend is positive effect to the benefits of costumers.
First, spacious shopping centers and supermarkets create more jobs than small local shops. In many metropolises, the number of people is higher than the available jobs, therefore, the appearance of shopping malls is particularly necessary. Moreover, people work in large shopping centers and supermarkets have better salary, working conditions and benefits, such as healthcare payment. For example, every year, Vincom shopping mall in Da Nang city employs more hundreds of people to take responsibilities for several jobs, which contributes to reduce the unemployment rate as well as city’s development.
Second, shopping malls and supermarkets have a wider range of products than small local shops. Groceries, clothes, shoes, reading material, food courts, cinemas, and entertainment are available in one place. They provide a lot of convenience to customers to purchase goods more easily as well as enjoy more entertainment facilities. Therefore, shopping malls can become the attractive places to attract many interests from tourists. Singapore, for instance, have built many magnificent shopping malls which customers can spend a whole day at the mall, shop, dine, watch a movie or play games. This is one of the most important impacts to increase the number of visitors to Singapore every year.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that the omnipresence of shopping malls and supermarkets has many positive effects on jobs and customers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57480314961 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06942223272 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.616192622 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377556761205 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143239383219 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108671053608 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2472806058 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581434867987 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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