Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a current issue that a lot of youngsters allocating their spare time for shopping malls, which has a negative impact not only for the youth but also for the whole society. From my perspective, I partly agree with this view of point. Therefore, I will demonstrate my reasons behind in the scope of the essay.
However, this trend could bring some bright sides for the economy. Obviously, the large expenditure for shopping from the youth could provide more motivation for the suppliers to produce more goods and services meeting the needs of the customers. Therefore, the suppliers would gain more profit thanks to the excess spending from youngsters.
However, taking more advantage of the free time to go shopping means that less time for studying to gain knowledge or working to earn money, which will affect negatively the spender and the society in the broaden level. Indeed, when there are increasing number of youngsters spending too much their relaxed time to purchasing goods based on their preferences instead of saving money or working to earn more, it would make them face with financial difficulty to meet their basic needs in the future. For example, there are many young people are willing to spend a lot of time to search for high-end products in shopping malls in order to show their wealth, leading to having trouble in their expenditure for the necessities. From the social viewpoint, this would cause the problem in the long run if the modern youngsters just prefer to waste their time in shopping activities which could not add more value for the communities.
In conclusion, although using the free time for excess spending on shopping could have some positive aspects regarding the economy, it brings more drawbacks for the youngsters as well as the communities. It is better if the youth limit their time spent for shopping and just go shopping at a moderate level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55290888008 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4465912747 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29222826739 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108718007093 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632133632244 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17462775823 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714754530633 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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