Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, it seems that mobile phones and computers are more popular in our life. Therefore, many people are choosing communication via technology rather than talking in person. In my perspective, I completely agree with this idea.
There are some reasons why individuals tend to use mobile phones and computers than ever before. One reason is that this development allows people to broaden their own knowledge for free. For instance, a vast amount of English material online on electronic equipment gives people countless opportunities to improve their English skills, ranging from hearing, speaking, reading to writing the English language constantly. The remaining reason is that mobile phones and computers provide a source of relaxation which able to reduce stress after a day of hard work. People could spend their spare time playing games which help players experience a wide range of emotions and relax.
However, it is true that people are decreasing rapidly in face-to-face communication with others. Firstly, there are many choices for users to connect with loved ones. Instead of relating to people in the real world, people often select either video conferencing or text-messaging. This may result in an excessive reliance on communication technologies and discourage real interaction. Secondly, such devices are extremely attractive as well as keep our eyes glued to screens, thus it’s easy to create a barrier communication. For example, children who are addicted to using computers, instead of playing outdoor games with friends, are more prone to talk.
By way of conclusion, I believe that more inhabitants are using modern tools which make they are losing the skill of face-to-face communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45895522388 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93028068408 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9205191669 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303901849344 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878274401595 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695097393272 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180409212381 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450493245649 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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