Nowadays, more and more people are suffering from obesity, which brings them lots of problems. In fact, the obesity problem is basically associated with two different factors and it may have two negative influences on overweight people such as health and social problems. To delve deeply into this issue, this essay will explore the causes of obesity and analyze several effects of this issue.
Admittedly, the problem of obesity is attributed to genetic factors and environmental factors. To begin with, a special gene in DNA is the first factor contributing to obesity. There is some evidence that if there is a family history of obesity, the children in this family will have the dominant or recessive gene which will be overweight easily in the future. In addition, eating habit is another reason why some people are corpulent. For example, if people eat the fast food with lots of sugar and high calorie every day, the fat will be rapidly stored in their bodies, and it will be hard to control that. With more fat being accumulated, obesity will easily happen to those people.
Owing to this disturbing phenomenon, people start to pay more attention to the possible effects of obesity including health problems and social problems. First, obesity gives rise to the risk of heart diseases. For instance, when people are getting fat, the percentage of fat in their blood will increase. After that, their blood will become thick and forms blood clots which will lead to some serious heart diseases. Furthermore, social discrimination is another consequence that obese people usually experience. Since many people have a stereotype of those fat people, they will treat these people differently which can be described as discrimination. In daily life, lots of people like to make jokes about overweight people and it will make them become much more self-abased because of their obesity.
In conclusion, obesity is a complex problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. There is no single cause of obesity, but the genetic factors and the environmental factors are the two main contributors to it. Meanwhile, it can result in health problems and social problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08707865169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66228569429 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5648355033 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157121230246 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521626606219 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547963763761 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112317268343 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606985941324 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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