Today more people are shopping online than ever before.
Why do people choose to shop in this way?
Are there disadvantages to shopping online?
In today’s world on internet you can find everything and there is happening everything. There are plenty of markets with products from all around the world. The question, however, arise why people are keen to do online shopping and what are the disadvantages of it?
Firstly, we must focus what people see as the advantages of the online shopping. I am pretty sure that the biggest advantage of the online shopping is that you have massive number of products available every day. Another factor that is positive side of the shopping online is that one product is selling by many shops and it is easy to find the best price and warranty option in few minutes. Moreover, online shops are open twenty for hours seven days a week, so you never have to worry about the opening hours.
However, there are disadvantages of the shopping online one of them is that we can loss our money. Our credit card or bank account could be hacked. That may happen when we would use unknown websites or when virus would be installed on our computer. The other, minus of the shopping online is that we cannot see physical items what we are about to buy. For example, clothes such as shirt or pants may not fit on us or might be different color than in description.
In conclusion, I think there are more advantages of the shopping online and we can easily avoid the disadvantages by using safe websites and antivirus protection for our computer. I believe that in not further future the traditional shops will no longer exist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66292134831 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49345958132 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7465568486 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364019903265 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124639024762 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11064312996 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223122308581 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527317186605 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.