You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regads to an accident that I have been involved in one of your store.
Two days ago I went to your supermall to do some grocery shopping and got injured by a minor accident. I am writing to inform you how this accident took place and what you can do to prevent such an accident in the future. I am hoping that you would take steps so that no other shooper fall vicitim to similar incidents.
I am tomasz zawadzki and live within 500 meters of your supermall. I have been a loyal customre to your business for more than 4 years.
In relation to the specifics of the event, I went to your store to buy some fresh vegetables and fruits on 27th September at around 7.30 pm. Just after I took a shopping cart, a woman with her groceries collided with me. I cannot say that it was entirely her fault as she was over 70 years old and sufficent light was not present at that corner of the mall. In addition, the floor was slippery. so, this unavidable accident occurred as the lack of attetion by your manager.
Hunderds of peoples, including childern and senior citizens go shopping to your mall every day. it is your resposibility to maintain this place to avoid such a mishap. Please arrange more electric bulbs at the corner of your shop and dry the floor immediately to avoid the unexpected accidents.
I hope you will give immediate attetion to this matter.
Your faitfully,
tomasz zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fall vicitim to similar incidents. I am tomasz zawadzki and live within 500 ...
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Line 13, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve within 500 meters of your supermall. I have been a loyal customre to your busi...
^
Line 17, column 396, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...l. In addition, the floor was slippery. so, this unavidable accident occurred as t...
^^
Line 19, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ens go shopping to your mall every day. it is your resposibility to maintain this ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55303030303 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46308547551 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3494107365 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.125 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109398485711 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358230392271 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057126842031 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707875950658 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703781787043 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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