Today, more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that the number of people who are waiting for reaching to thirty in order to start a family and be parents has increased in recent years. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
On the one hand, getting married at older ages may bring some benefits to both parents and children. Firstly, parents can build their careers before having a baby at that age which is a dream for some people who started a family at around twenties. Secondly, their children might be provided with everything such as a better opportunity to study and good family environment as most of parents will be financially stable when their babies are born. Moreover, scientific researches show that having children later in life may have powerful influence on their brains, I mean most of those offspring were seen to be super intelligent in their lives.
However, there are some negative sides of this trend to men and women as well. One of the most dangerous impacts might be for the females' lives while a baby is being born. Because after bearing, women are likely to die because of maturity. Doctors have witnesses that 10% of them pass away after the childbirth operation. Another drawback is that most of men are unlikely to see and play with their grandchildren which is the most favorite activity for almost each father as a consequence of the short life expectancy, at around 65 age. Furthermore, after the age of 35, fertility in women starts decreasing rapidly, as a result, their chances of getting pregnant also go down.
To conclude, late marriage and having children after the age of thirty may have both benefits, such as gaining careers and better provision, and drawbacks, such as pregnancy problems and unlikely to spend time with grandchildren.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...to study and good family environment as most of parents will be financially stable when their b...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the men') or simply say ''most men''.
Suggestion: most of the men; most men
...rth operation. Another drawback is that most of men are unlikely to see and play with their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, i mean, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89576547231 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60524015353 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5631386073 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20564565295 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727345572682 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457120721787 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1301186639 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467642711648 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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