At the out of new millennium, travelling is maiden requirement of everyone not only for fun but also for to learn different language, culture. It started that, in several countries citizen tend to move abroad or move to a other different part of country after their retirement. This complete agreement will be articultedbin upcoming paragraph before reaching to conclusion.
It notewarthy mention that, after retirement people are always in fond of to move from one place to other place. The main factor behind this circumtance is to get knowledge about different cultures as well as to get knowledge about different cultures as well as to learn new language. Another factor is may be they want to enjoy their life by travelling overseas after completing their job sector time. For instance:- Army retired person always want to travel the world owing to they have not style to stay home for long time. Hence, it is enough to prove thatwl why people prefee to move abroad after retirement.
In addition to, the main outcome of travelling from one country to another country is that help the countryvto appreciate their currency value. For example:- In india from starting of 21st Century to 2020 Indian currency is appreciated by five rupees due to depreciation of foreign money. Foreign people spend their money in India for travelling whole area as well as investing money on food also. So, they spend all their currency in India which increase Indian currency value and decrease foreign currency. Therefore, it clear that why travellers are important for developing countries.
To sum up, after amalization reason of travelling and outcome of situation from my mind. Travelling is good for both the countries to increase their more facilities to people.
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- In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 60
- Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services 73
- Many people join distance learning programmes study material post TV Internet and study at home but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does 73
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion To what extent do you support this development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...e, culture. It started that, in several countries citizen tend to move abroad or move to ...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... citizen tend to move abroad or move to a other different part of country after t...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...o learn new language. Another factor is may be they want to enjoy their life by travel...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...area as well as investing money on food also. So, they spend all their currency in I...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...ecrease foreign currency. Therefore, it clear that why travellers are important for d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08650519031 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70060281945 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9457553797 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295478862211 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100155862805 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871588150062 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182906703967 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402563368781 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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