The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011

The give table illusrates information changes in the number of residents cycling to work in different ares of the UK between 2001 and 2011.
A quick look reveal that in 2001 residents of UK use less cycling than 2011. Inner loandon stood at higher percentage and lower percantage is reveal by outer London
In 2001 around 44000 people using cucling for their work while, in 2011 shows almost double data than past ten years. Brighton and Hove Displays as much as twice number of residents. From 2001 to 2011because in 2011 new technologycal cycle are introducte by companies which bis easy and fast way for people to travel and it is sustainable growth of development. After this in 2001 Sheffield also shows only 2,365 people using cycle while, after ten years 4,267 people using this equipment that displays 80 per cent change.
Futhuremore, In Leeds almost 50 per cent change is in number of cycleic owner however in starting of 21 century appoximately 489 people using this but after ten years around 6240 Uk residents using this method for their travel.OuterLondon shows less change in per cent than other area because only 45 per cent people change from 33,836 ti 48070 between ten years respectively.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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...st ten years. Brighton and Hove Displays as much as twice number of residents. F...
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...nt change. Futhuremore, In Leeds almost 50 per cent change is in number of cycle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61324134727 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575609756098 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.7050853682 43.030603864 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.285714286 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 1.69756097561 1532% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358047296137 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19571449488 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181842798182 0.0843802449381 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275295288893 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196141318056 0.0819641961636 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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