Today parents spend little free time with their children. Why is it the case? Who are more affected: parents or children?
These days, parents often allocate a lower amount of time to interacting with their little ones. This tendency happens because of some reasons and I believe that the impacts of this on children are more significant.
To begin with, parents' less time spent on their offspring is caused by some factors. The first one is that parents’ working schedules are getting more hectic. To illustrate, these individuals often work overtime so that they can raise their income. As the result, when these parents get home after a long day at work, they feel tired, stressed and prefer relaxing to spending time with their offspring. Secondly, due to the development of technology, parents tend to be attracted to content on social media. For example, these individuals usually spend hours seeing videos on Tiktok in their free time. Consequently, these parents might not pay enough attention to their little ones.
At the same time, there are several reasons why children are more affected when receiving less time from their parents. Firstly, this trend makes children do not receive sufficient care from parents. Therefore, they cannot share their problems such as pressure at school or friendship which may lead to some mental illnesses including depression or autism. Moreover, without guidance from parents, children may be inappropriate behaviors. For instance, they may engage in bullying and name-calling in the class. Finally, these young individuals can imitate activities that their parents perform in their spare time such as looking at phones or watching television. This might cause short-sightedness and obesity.
In conclusion, that parents spend less time on their offspring happens since these adults are busier and more fascinated by social media. Meanwhile, children experience more adverse impacts including the lack of parents’ care, displaying improper behavior and copying parents’ actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49662162162 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71680232684 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2298841465 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421450956884 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128162864861 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824765509989 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270015833233 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363465812382 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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