Today people are surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, we live in the world which is dominated by advertisement. Adverts are on television, in the street and even on our mobile phones. Many people argue that this advertise has a negative impact on people's lives, but I partially agree with this statement with assisting example.
To begin with, there are many disadvantages regarding advertisement. Firstly, peoples are more alluring to buy new product regarding their daily usage. It can said that nowadays after showing advertisement of latest product, many people has replaced their old product any buy new. For example, many teenager are frequently changes their smartphones and buy latest product after seeing on digital platform such as Flipkart, Amazon and many others platform. Moreover, ads of tobacco and alcohol can badly impact on children and teens. This advertise main aim to consume by more and more people as consequence many teenager are addicted to consume this product on regular basis and in future they faces different illnesses as cancer, diabetes and many other. Overall, due to advertise people will face different illnesses as well as spend money to replace with new technology.
On the flip side of coins, there are many benefits of advertisement. First of all, people can know regarding new product information. recently, Apple company published their new iphone series smartphone in television and digital platform as a result, who peoples want to buy new smartphone can easily inform about this product. Apart from this, people can easily inform regarding upcoming sell on flipkart, amazon and many others. For example,this all applications have provided their different festival sell on television. All-in-all, people know about upcoming sell information from advertise and any latest product information.
In recapitulation, although there are both advantages and disadvantages about advertisement, as far as I think that ads are know about latest technological information and upcoming sell information, whereas due to more advertise many teenager are frequently change their smartphones and they started drinking alcohol and smoking cigarette which badly impact on their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, well, whereas, apart from, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49562682216 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93048021708 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507288629738 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8134205829 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196524553559 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743207703876 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770829661531 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135628401729 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653657960036 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.