Today’s children are living under more pressure from society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people argue that despite the progressing improvement and achievements in modern life, youngsters suffer more pressure than the previous generations. From my point of view, I completely agree with this statement because of some reasons to extent.
First and foremost, today’s competitive and coercive collectivist culture puts young people under peer pressure. This is because the desire to fit in and keep up with friends and psychological instability cause children to have negative thoughts that lead to invisible burden in their minds. Furthermore, growing up in a collectivist environment creates social comparisons in adolescents that force them to behave and act like their partners to gain recognition. For example, in schools, the competition for scores in exams makes children more likely to compare themselves with their peers.
Apart from that, in modern society, high expectation and standards from parents put young generation under heavy psychological stress. It is because the conflict in children's interests and parents' desires creates disagreements in the family that affect their psychology as well as their perception. For instance, according to a study conducted at a gifted school for children in Vietnam, up to 80% of students enrolled do not like their subject and they are forced by their parents even though they do not have natural talents. As a result, they often suffer from stress during their studies and even suffer from psychological diseases.
To sum up, academic culture competition are powerful causes of stress on today’s young generations than that faced by earlier ones that they can not freely enjoy their life. It is advisable that parents should encourage children to develop at their pleasure and unleash their creativity in a hasty manner to help them achieve success in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty manner" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...r pleasure and unleash their creativity in a hasty manner to help them achieve success in the fut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39236111111 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87150678482 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7983356224 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202247756907 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765145042418 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417625478489 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127164591491 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434049515295 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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