Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, children are being lived under more pressure from factors in the society than those in the past. I completely agree with this assertion that when compared to children in the past, children at the present are forced to suffer from more pressure.
There are various compelling reasons which should be taken into consideration. The main driving force of this issue is that technological advances prompt children to be under more pressure. This means that children can be cyberbullied on social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram or Twitter about their academic achievements, which is one of the most rife circumstance. For example, an ever-increasing number of young people who are suffering from heavy pressure are adversly impacted by social media platforms. Not only do such platforms effect badly on children’s minds but they also influenced on their actions, which leads to a growing number of suicide activities every year.
Another reason to explain why this is the case is peer presure. In fact, most teenagers are living under peer pressure because their friends usually show off their achievements on social media. This leads young people to not only be more pressure to be successful in their own life but also make their parents proud of them. Taking the Tiktok platform as an example, most teenager struggle to suffer from peer pressure when an increasing number of young people use their social achievements or monthly salary to create some contents there.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons to cause this phenomenon, which is closely related to social media platforms, one of technological advances at the present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'teenager' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: teenager
...king the Tiktok platform as an example, most teenager struggle to suffer from peer pressure w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24436090226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75489019355 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1092329543 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274678240887 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116745885652 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126144450798 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195814770153 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183462612991 0.056905535591 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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