Irrefutably, machines are the bliss of this hi tech era. The trend of using machines has been increased than past. In my perspectives ,the high use of machinery is greatly advantageous to human being and hence society. The essay would shed light on the relevant standpoints in the subsequent paragraph.
To embark with, the quantity of products has been grown to by using advanced tools. This is because more products can be produced in less time by usage of these technical instruments , that provide extra time to the employers or the other workers to create other important products. According to survey of human psychology, with the utilisation of electronic machines contractors are able to develop things 45% more than by human power. This reveals that machinery has contributed in escalating the product production than past.
probing with the other view point, hardship of doing work is reduced by working with technical tools. This is because machines have made the work easy and less laborious that give to time to employees to maintain their health and spend extra time for dealing with their health issues. an ideal example of it is agricultural and irrigation methods that include new technology machines and lead to more production of crops with less hard efforts . Thus, hard labour people has been reduced by using extra ordinary equipments.
Nevertheless,machines have their own disadvantages. How one can be unfamiliar with the flip side of an advanced equipment? This is because utilising advanced machinery has made many people unemployed in last few years as human workers are replaced by electronic power to exemplify, the survey of word Union labour showed that 22% of joblessness in the society is owing to making large use of innovative methods by the manufacturers and industries , which further leads to economic deprivation among society members. Hence, advanced technology have made people jobless in the community.
In the final reckoning, using technical instruments are greatly beneficial in terms of quantity and quality of work. Clearly, while it has raised the productivity as well as made the work less difficult in last few decades. However, the development outweigh the negative impacts if handled with great care and prudence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24517906336 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89907577163 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534435261708 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9776742106 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.210526316 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134557243718 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379413274816 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355950852659 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721643316378 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223549036978 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.