In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
It is true that amidst the proliferation of science and technology, people still put a great emphasis on the arts. There are, conspicuously, significant messages that cannot be covered by scientific hypotheses or technological appliances but are contained in artworks.
From a scientific perspective, theories and figures are always formulated and demonstrated with high accuracy, dealing with objective evidence and improvement. Conversely, arts are created based on subjectivity and improvisation, which satisfies the human demand and desire for a perfect world. For instance, while the dog is defined as a carnivorous mammal with four paws under physical eyesight, it would become a friend or a companion and even be visualised as a heroic statue in a literary masterpiece. Another outstanding reference for this is fairy tales which satisfy people’s innermost aspiration for a wonderland or eternal life. Speaking of which, arts also enable people to gain deeper insights into the world and teach them to think from different aspects when encountering problems.
From a technology perspective, in order to produce and supply efficient tools serving human life technical world attaches great importance to practical issues rather than abstract values. As a result, materialism and consumerism are enriched and spread, benefiting people’s physical lives and their advancement. Arts, however, putting a substantial emphasis on emotional features, are a source of inspiration and motivation for all activities. For instance, when feeling down or depressed, a number of people would immerse themselves in different forms of art ranging from healing songs to painting exhibitions as a way of rejuvenation and self-reflection. In other words, arts instil religious and spiritual values into each individual, helping us to be more well-rounded human beings.
In conclusion, arts convey various lessons and meanings that cannot be incorporated by any form of technology and science, in my opinion, regardless of how developed and enhanced scientific or technological inventions humans can achieve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, speaking of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71565495208 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27295984164 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651757188498 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8020380779 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.615384615 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163240306133 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523443015552 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498283873007 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110556252356 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445942145884 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.