Today, states spend a huge amount of money annually on their space researches, one of the spaces Mars is the centre of scientists' eyes. It is often argued that this investment should be directed to other problematic issues to solve them instead
Today, states spend a huge amount of money annually on their space researches, one of the spaces Mars is the centre of scientists' eyes. It is often argued that this investment should be directed to other problematic issues to solve them instead. In my opinion, I partly agree with that statement as I consider that not all authorities cannot afford to launch this type of programme, only developed and economically powerful country manage to do it.So that there might be less serious problems to deal with them.
Firstly, It is an indisputable fact that most governments have been investing to learn the spaces including the Red one. This is undoubtedly excellent way to illustrate one particular country's financially strong budget to the world as those methods require a large amount of money to set up their experiments. This means that in order to set these approaches countries should have a well equipped industry with modern technologies which are today profoundly expensive.Taking Russian state as an example, scientists are planning to commence a new project to the globe. Admittedly, the state of Russian has done many explorations about that since it has sufficient financial to do it.
However, there are significantly vital issues which should be considered one of them is air pollution. There are a couple causes to lead the problem- industries and transportation.
The more they are getting progressed, the more air is becoming polluted.The chemicals, steam, poisenous substances are sent out from those machineries and spoil atmosphere consequently, it leads to air pollution.
For instance, in most industrilezed country - Japan, it's inhabitants have experienced many environmental happens. One of them is black snow.Once in winter the colour of the snow was black, the reason was the steam and gas which was produced by fabrics. I think this can be an exact example for problematic issue which must be taken into consideration and set up prevention rather than attempts for development.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position again that launching space programmes is a sign to show financial stability of country, yet there are a large number of affects caused by manufacturing and other actions.Therefore, government should be more careful about both sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28021978022 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14099044563 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1287961073 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.285714286 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383352889395 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128884749688 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167539931107 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167756477854 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177586714083 0.056905535591 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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