Similarities among nations are now common as citizens have equal opportunities such as worldwide consumptions. To my mind, even though purchasing all types of products from every part of the world brings about negative effects including loss of cultures and local companies, it can be more useful and beneficial for people who cannot find sufficient materials locally.
Similarities among nations are now common as citizens have equal opportunities such as worldwide consumptions. To my mind, even though purchasing all types of products from every part of the world brings about negative effects including loss of cultures and local companies, it can be more useful and beneficial for people who cannot find sufficient materials locally.
It is an indisputable fact that almost all countries are able to buy imported products. It means that there is an access and opportunity to use international objects equally.Yet, there are negatives which must be be taken into consideration. One negative side can be the loss of cultural concepts since nationwide access of materials such as fashionable and stylish clothes is sometimes unsuitable and inappropriate for some particular nationality and it leads to some alteration in people's lifestyles.
However, finding vital products to live in local and residential areas might be difficult. It means that some countries are not able to manufacture all sorts of items locally therefore, there are no ways except buying products from abroad. Taking Uzbekistan as an example, my country, we have to import some medical products including vaccines for curable diseases such as coronovirus as my government cannot produce these medicine locally. This can be an exact sample for positive sides
In conclusion, although consuming all ranges of materials from every edge of the Earth affect negatively, it has more useful sides for people.
- Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates Some believe that having mire police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crimes To what extend do you agree or disagree 84
- The figures illustrate the statistics about usage of water in Oceania in the year of 2004 100
- Task 2 In many countries it is acceptable that governments spend money on religious holidays such as New Year To what extent do you agree and disagree with this 73
- The bar chart illustrates the statistics of different aged people who donated money to charity during 1990 and 2010 in UK 84
- The bar chart illustrates the statistics about households in owned and rented accommodation in UK from 1918 to 2011 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Yet
...ty to use international objects equally.Yet, there are negatives which must be be ...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnational objects equally.Yet, there are negatives which must be be taken into co...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...ly.Yet, there are negatives which must be be taken into consideration. One negative ...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this medicine' or 'these medicines'?
Suggestion: this medicine; these medicines
...novirus as my government cannot produce these medicine locally. This can be an exact sample fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41949152542 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00206706055 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622881355932 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9751045199 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.111111111 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362600031838 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141972507954 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152760616819 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239224305358 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252590549171 0.056905535591 444% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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