Today there is a great increase in antisocial personal behavior such as committing a crime. What are the causes of this? Who should be responsible for this problem? (crime)
It is true that in fast-paced life nowadays, people who have antisocial behaviour, including offensing crimes, are increasingly developing. This phenomenon can be attributed to several factors, and I believe that both government and family have responsibilities for it.
On the one hand, two main reasons can coontribute to increasingly people commiting crimes. Initially, the huge flux of people moving from countrysides to major cities to seek a better job opportunities, leading to the high competition in job market. This means that a number of people may not be employed, making them in condition of economical unstability. Consequently, the fastes way to escape this situtation is stealing or selling illegal drugs, all of which make people earn money quickly. Secondly, the lack of care from family can also be the reason why people commit crimes. These days, a combination of pressure of studying and the unadequate of caring from parents can make youngsters have a sense of isolation. Therefore, they tend to seek supports and enthusiasm from other group of people, including negative ones. So, they may have the same lifestyle with these offenders to fit them in the community.
On the other hand, government and family should be responsible mainly for this disadvantagous trend. Firstly, as government cannot ensure enough job opportunities for everyone, leading to the high unemployment rate. Therefore, authorities should provide adequate careers for people, in all regions either rural areas or urban ones. In addition, family should care and support their sons and daughters more, especially those who are in the sentitive ages that easier to commit crimes. Parent may also educate their children to avoid joining in a lot of bad communities and share feelings with them.
In conclusion, while numerous reasons can contribute to this trend of antisocial personal behavior, such as economical unstability and mental issue, either authorities should take responsibilities for this negative phenomenan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44728434505 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05782011554 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584664536741 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8350779517 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232845539952 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741405789319 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793078058652 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171214941578 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719725080883 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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