Today we can see in all places women do the work but sometime they worry about their children so government should arrange the servant facilities who should take care for their children what is your opinion?
Nowadays I’m this comparative world women are become more modern and efficient and most ambitions about their career but sometime they have to suffer for some family problems and it’s burden on their shoulders like family responsibilities and work load
I strongly agree with the above mentioned statement that government should arrange the facilities for working women there are following my view mentioned as below
Firstly if government arrange facilities like they decrease day care fees and make rules of timing and fees some particular amount so it will be easy for working women they can put their children in day care school in safe hand so they do not have to worry about their children during job hours and if day care fee is low so she can afford for children
Secondly government should made rules for working women that who have children they can take 2 or 3 hours leave in lunch time so in that time she can visit her children and make her children comfortable so it’s good for children and mother and children can attach with mother for fee hours child can enjoy motherhood and fill comfortable
To conclude Now in this modern era women’s have more responsibilities then man so government should make sure perk for working women
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- Young people should be encouraged for visiting different countries which is beneficial for them in future do you agree or disagree 78
- Today we can see in all places women do the work but sometime they worry about their children so government should arrange the servant facilities who should take care for their children what is your opinion? 56
- Today we can see in all places women do the work but sometime they worry about their children so government should arrange the servant facilities who should take care for their children what is your opinion? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97196261682 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59340321572 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 214.0 20.2975951904 1054% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1064.0 106.682146367 997% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 214.0 20.7667163134 1030% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 51.0 7.06120827912 722% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457560749097 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.457560749097 0.084324248473 543% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233842162353 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860357086075 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 109.0 13.0946893788 832% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -137.27 50.2224549098 -273% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 85.6 11.3001002004 758% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.03 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.46 8.58950901804 192% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 87.6 10.1190380762 866% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 88.0 10.7795591182 816% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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