In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is known that technology has been developing fastly with in time and also, technology bring new rules, variety of perspective and new approach to our life. We should organized our life according to technology and keep up with revolution of technology. In my opinion, governments and companies should pay attention to education system and job application so that they can compete with other countries and world.
To start with, because of advent of improved technologies, multi-directional shape of think, creative mind and analytical thinking skills should be integrated to education system by governments in order to prepare children of present age to future. Therefore, teachers should prefer new education method instead of old education method, which base on theoretical knowledge, and practical skills should be gained to student. Thus, children have extraordinary knowledge and they are prepared to future very well.
In addition to be revised education system which base on practical skills by government, when companies evaluate their job applicants, they will look CV which has practical skills and experience mostly rather than theoretical knowledge. What's more, the company's human resources no longer look ordinary qualifications almost for business. Because of this, it is important having infrastructure of the new and futuristic educational principle for job in the future.
In conclusion, people should adopt another perspectives, which is developed and accordance with the future about education, and be ready and global for business market nowadays and in the future. Hopefully, government and authorizes and will notice this situation and they will make necessary regulates about it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63953488372 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06776028658 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.075963027 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151928851501 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571797197089 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551285654328 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900938084999 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757404483781 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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