Most people worldwide are certain that the science is the engine of progress. They also try to command profound respect for inventions in science and technology among plebs by turning the crowd into insensitive area of the plain facts. At the same time there are many of us whol cherish the beauty in all its forms. This is why artists are still greatly valued yet and why we need Arts.
First of all, in my view, people need to feel and express their emotions. Some of us who could do it better than others became outstanding because of their contributions in preservation of cultural Identity or depicting the most complicated feelings of human’s soul like misfortune, misery or sorrow. The Arts allow us of to be advanced in understanding human relationships, while Science and Technology just can report us the mechanisms of something, like how it works, what the expected results we will have. For example scientific inventions are devoted to make our life and works comfort, wile beautiful music or sentimental paintings provide us a deeper extend into self-knowledge. If I listen to a sad song or Moonlight Sonata I can relax and plunge into my dreams. Also, I can imagine pictures when I read books and soon I even can narrate a resonant story reading to the plat but supplemented by my own feelings and experience.
Moreover, any masterpiece of art can become a witness for history because of its uniqueness. For instance, Sheakspire wrote his Romeo and Juliet a long time ago, but we still today can admire it. As a result, a lot of young talented artists are inspired by the true love and make their new marks on the history.
In additional, people value every forms of Arts just to have an opportunity to open their beauty again. Obviously, they understand that arts are limitless and can touch the heart of everyone at all ages and life conditions. For me, it is still priceless to open my favorite book, which I read in my childhood.
In conclusion, even though the fact that Science and Technology improve significantly our life, they cannot replace arts due to many intangible aspects, which people experience from enjoying the music, books, and many other directions in art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85941644562 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80127450758 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602122015915 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5528365348 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273341047635 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731219015527 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056279732105 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139171323535 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322594781337 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.