Too much emphasis is placed on going to university for academic study. People should be encouraged to do vocational training, because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The debate between academic study versus vocational training has amplified during the last decade or so, where the trend has certainly shifted towards vocational training as the preferred choice amongst the modern youth.
In the past, parents have influenced the choice of education their offspring must follow, which was towards an academic stream. As a result there was an abundance of doctors, lawyers, accountants, etc, which was believed to be the best professions to be in. Parents having successfully educated their children to become doctors or lawyers was deemed an achievement and an elevation of social status in their community. Vocational training education at this point of time was deemed to be of a lower class of education, thus ignored.
However, with the change of dynamics towards vocational training education, academic training has somewhat taken a back-seat. There are more institutions providing high quality education involving vocational training in order to provide students with the highest possible skill of their field of choice. These state government funded institutions are becoming centre stage throughout the world as more and more youth are getting themselves enrolled in such courses.
I am in agreement of more people choosing vocational training education as this will cater to the deficit of skilled tradesmen such as professional tilers, painters, builders, etc. Traditionally these programmes involved on-site training from a professional and the students having to undergo a training or apprenticeship period in order to gain the required qualification. However, presently there are more and more of these courses being offered online with the ease of access and flexibility of acquiring such skills. This way, more people who aren’t keen academics have the opportunity to acquire a qualification which in in par with any academic qualification.
Similarly, academic study should remain for the individuals who have a passion in this field rather than being forced by parents or social pressure. We still need competent doctors and lawyers. Therefore, academics is also considered important and those who choose this field should be trained to become skilled in their chosen field of profession.
In conclusion, I believe even though more people should be encouraged to take up vocational training, academic training should be for those who seek greatness in such fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 629, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...tunity to acquire a qualification which in in par with any academic qualification. ...
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Line 11, column 329, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ained to become skilled in their chosen field of profession. In conclusion, I beli...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257907542579 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.167883211679 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107055961071 0.0946595960268 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036496350365 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.021897810219 0.0437548338989 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119221411192 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0632603406326 0.0403226058552 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93063894757 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267639902676 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00243309002433 0.00163938923432 148% => OK
Determiners: 0.0948905109489 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014598540146 0.021408717616 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194647201946 0.011925033212 163% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2435.0 1933.35771543 126% => OK
No of words: 372.0 316.048096192 118% => OK
Chars per words: 6.54569892473 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.456989247312 0.374742101984 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.35752688172 0.28420135186 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.268817204301 0.203846283523 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172043010753 0.137316102897 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93063894757 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.56093040696 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.4626653178 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.25 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6902765563 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.1875 127.492653851 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 59.002688172 49.1944974215 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.94623655914 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252637164682 0.332605444948 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144282448814 0.102741220458 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0672917740261 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.615113835712 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173875746948 0.148594505496 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105729764309 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588639834115 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.252034884715 0.324371583561 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107330609907 0.0638462369009 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156123281533 0.228012699653 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459220864366 0.058150111329 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.