Topic 1: Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
Today, Soaring crime rates in urban areas have sparked considerable public debate. Although this issue can be attributed to a host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be utilized to address it.
Some reasons can be cited to explain the emergence of this problem. Firstly, drug trafficking is the underlying cause of increasing crime rates. Specifically, urban areas are appealing places for drug dealers to make profits by targeting vulnerable persons suffering from unemployment or a broken relationship. Besides, many scientists suggest that the human brain is susceptible to the side effects of drugs; means that addicts are more likely to commit crimes after getting high.
Nevertheless, this situation can be remedied, provided that some reasonable steps are taken. First, the government should take the initiative to tighten the law to reduce drug trafficking and drug dealers. Besides, along with fixing the loophole of law, education is the essential step to reduce the crimes. By giving criminal knowledge, It not only helps them realized the harm of illegal activities but also provide them with another chance to affiliate with society.
In conclusion, the problem of soaring crime rates exists due to drug trafficking. Tackling this problem depend not only on the individual’s effort but also on society's attempt to diminish the crime rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48356807512 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87488062613 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7666826462 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199636053291 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731212219877 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560588089793 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127823858377 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612066591684 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.