Topic 1. People in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There can be no doubt that the topic of media is one which deserves some analysis. It is the opinion of this writer that completely advocates the idea that people in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior because people in the limelight are role models for everyone and they will inspire others to do good deeds.
People in the limelight are role models for everyone. They should never indulge in activities that can cause problems in society. To illustrate, they should not indulge in harmful habits such as smoking, drinking or substance abuse because they are role models of many people and what they do will greatly affect their fans as much as fans will imitate and learn bad habits from people in the limelight. This is because their actions are imitated by millions, including children. Thus, people in the limelight are role models for everyone.
People in the limelight will inspire others. Celebrities can contribute what they can to help the poor and this will make others follow. For instance, when a celebrity gets involved in charitable work, countless others follow suit. This is because they spread positive energy to everyone and inspire others to do good work. Therefore, celebrities will inspire others to do good deeds.
It can be seen that people in the limelight are role models for everyone and they will inspire others to do good deeds. To conclude, this writer agrees with the idea that people in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, thus, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90601503759 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50058786689 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424812030075 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3643347152 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403168269358 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1616926588 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154523477502 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320406462127 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157592296502 0.056905535591 277% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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