Many people think that men should go out to work while woman's place is in the home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There can be no doubt that the topic of gender is one which deserves some analysis. It is the opinion of this writer that completely opposes the idea that many people think that men should go out to work while a woman's place is in the home because women can shoulder a lot of work in the home and at work and not only men but also women should focus on their career goals.
Women can shoulder a lot of work in the home and at work. Men work to earn money for their families, but at the same time women can also work and manage household chores. For instance, according to surveys, more than 80% of working women are achieving more in their workplace and at home. This is because women can focus on many things such as going to work or taking care of children and the elderly while men can only focus on one thing at a time. As a result, women can shoulder a lot of work in the home and at work.
Not only men but also women should focus on their career goals. Men can encourage women to motivate them and make them successful in their achievements. To illustrate, a couple in Japan started a business, the husband gave his wife the name of the shop because of the idea she created. This is because men play an essential role in helping women make their career. Thus, women should focus on their career goals.
It can be seen that women can shoulder a lot of work in the home and at work and not only men but also women should focus on their career goals. To conclude, this writer disagrees with the idea that many people think that men should go out to work while a woman's place is in the home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22077922078 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05383769641 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.376623376623 0.561755894193 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4251372634 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283317933609 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132638053139 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155813318616 0.0667982634062 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251129356658 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146572786713 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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