TOPIC 1: Some people think that it is more effective for students in studying in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some students tend to gather in groups for studying which they can feel highly productive but the other ones can make an impressive result when they study themselves. From my personal view, both methods have their own advantages but I do believe that personal studying is probably more useful.
In general, there are some beneficial aspects that may be found in studying among many students. Firstly, when they share and discuss ideas, thoughts or any other problems with their friends, they can probably improve their social skills. Secondly, through discussing different subjects, they can apparently learn from their own friends and find out more solutions for their issues which can widen their options before they make any decisions.
However, studying in person is also appropriate for a number of learners. Certainly, some students are easily distracted by surrounding environment. They get carried away usually by noises and people and that is the reason why they can only focus when they are alone. On the other hand, without communication, they can avoid arguments with others during interacting process so they could be more stable with their intention. Furthermore, they do not have to wait anyone and can control their own organization way in studying. In other words, they are completely independent and totally pay attention on their works.
To conclude, both learning methods are generally used among students and have their own benefits but I suppose that personal studying sounds more effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, i suppose, in general, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32780082988 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62636918963 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609958506224 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0991439236 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1956726933 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863078109538 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556009256866 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147960353797 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601822027417 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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