Topic 2: Some people believe that robots will play an important role in our societies, while other argue that robots might have negative impact on society.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some argue that robots might be a helpful resource of energy in our coming life. Others, however, say that robotics could pose a threat to the human being. In this essay, I am going to analyze both opinions before stating my personal perspective.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that thanks to automated machines and processes, factories could significantly increase their profit from sales. It is due to the fast and accuracy of the machines, the number of goods, as well as its quality, would be improved remarkably, which is less money needed to pay than a human worker. Replacing old working methods not only leads to the enhancement of the economy but also saving more time for people to focus on other fields. Moreover, robots can reach places that are dangerous or humans cannot have enough ability to discover so that the mortality rate due to occupational accidents would dramatically decrease. To illustrate, robots can help discover gold mines or send information from the space station. Furthermore, improvement of life quality is one of the robot’s advantages. The most well-known robot with families is the vacuum robot which automatic go around the house to clean dust and come back to charge when it is out of batteries. In addition, humanoids are popularly using in hospitals and nursing homes as assistants with reminding patients to take medicines and more.
On the other hand, robotics technologies and automation also rise the unemployed rate, since the odd jobs and manual labour are replaced by automated machines and processes. This leads to the fact that people would be over-depend on the robot, not only in factories but also at home, when everything can be done by touching, they will be lazy and avoid physical activities. Finally, the scariest consequent is robots might take control of human; once people need robots to finish most of our daily tasks, people could be easy to desperate.
In conclusion, I want to emphasize the importance of robotics in our future because robots are still on evolution. The government should take measures on creating new jobs and managing robotics engineering to mitigate the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06442577031 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74737514884 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9755548315 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216720772215 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724067188002 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574767581157 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147160960122 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302517563377 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.