Topic 27/6/19: Science finds that by studying the behavior of three-year-old children they can predict if they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent is criminality related to human nature? Is it possible to stop children from being a criminal when they grow up?
It is true that some people can behave disturbingly from an early age. However, from my perspective, there are more causes of criminality than sole human nature and it is not impossible to stop children from committing crimes in their developmental process.
On the one hand, some young individuals are just born criminals indeed. Some scientists who study the brain of prior offenders, realize that there is a part of these criminals’ brain actively inclined towards violence. This means there is hardly any way to prevent them from juvenile delinquency. Nevertheless, should three-year-olds’ behaviors be researched, it is not guaranteed that criminality can be predicted and avoided since these babies have not reached their full cognitive potential. Thus, I believe that the reason some other youngsters committing felony is because of their upbringing and surrounding. This can be attributed to their neglectful or abusive parents or even some traumatic experiences which distort their world views.
On the other hand, there are some actions for educators to help their children stay on the right track. Firstly, both parents and teachers need to create a supportive and comfortable environment which involves educating children social norms and respecting their decisions. Besides, if the caregivers notice any problematic behaviors from their offspring, it is imperative that they clarify to the children what is right and wrong. Finally, children themselves ought to take precautions against strangers and criminals to make sure they do not get tangled in troubles.
To sum up, both nature and nurture are the causes for criminality. However, it requires the cooperative actions of parents, teachers and the children themselves to create more law-abiding young citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...some other youngsters committing felony is because of their upbringing and surrounding. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, even so, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54744525547 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02453250919 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4025894473 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293280349686 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876800596709 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701488733703 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156921824841 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510145577147 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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