Topic: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Through all these years, there has been a controversial discussion among people about how to be a victorious human in various fields. While some individuals have believed that those well-known people have been born with particular abilities, others have wanted to demonstrate that anyone could be able to be successful by being taught. I myself have concurred with groups whom have thought this issue as an inherited skill rather than learning one.
First of all, human-beings whom have thought, if one person is diligent in learning their interested field, they will be able to become worthy human, would have some reasons. Actually, they have not believed skills to be inherited so because of that in their opinion people especially in their young ages not only have the tendency to be taught diverse information, but also have had the ability to comprehend hard situations and overcome their difficulties. As a result, any teenager could be able to become successful person by trying extremely hard.
On the other hand, although this another group of individuals have believed hardworking as an essential factor of victory, they have known specific and successful people as ones who have been born with spectacular talents. Moreover, people may have been fond of some fields such as sports or music and also they have been working hard day and night but have not become like famous ones. That is for the reason which some skills could be taught as learning courses, but other ones could not. Consequently, in this group of people’s beliefs, which I have agreed with, if some individuals have been extremely prosperous, is because of their inherited talents despite their hard works.
In conclusion, human-beings have had various opinions from each other about different topics. As like other issues, they have divided into two groups in believing talents as principles which humans have been born with or as ones which they could learn. In my opinion, some certain abilities have been inherited from previous generations, but others could be taught during people’s lifespan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63415477935 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7608114901 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18514454855 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089874449867 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03821916051 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136327078949 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141251075708 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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