Topic: More and more people are migrating to cities in search of better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Although it is undeniable that urban areas are places of opportunity for a better quality of life, migrants have to confront some drawbacks when settling in a metropolis. This essay will discuss some of the obstacles, and I think the government could tackle these problems by taking certain measures.
When it comes to difficulties in living in a city, rural-urban migrants may find it struggling to make ends meet due to the higher cost of living, compared to the countryside. As a result, this problem may put residents under pressure, exerting bad influences on their well-being and personal satisfaction. Another problem is overcrowding, which may lead to such consequences as pollution and the quality of the infrastructure . It is evident that the air quality in the city is much worse than in the countryside, and there is not enough investment in the infrastructure to keep up with the rapid growth of citizens. Additionally, the high crime rate is a contributing factor, which makes urban areas unhealthy places to live.
I think the government could implement some measures to improve urban life for citizens. Firstly, the authority should invest in the transport system appropriately to encourage the use of public transport, which could alleviate air pollution and traffic congestion. Secondly, the inhabitants should be encouraged to settle down in satellite towns while working in nearby large cities. Not only could this reduce the strain that overcrowding causes to the metropolis, but the inhabitants could also benefit a more comfortable living standard.
In conclusion, although there are certain difficulties when living in a city, it could be a rewarding place to settle if the government implements appropriate solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14537613419 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8297295191 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187566168933 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636830168461 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571860012665 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106170264212 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252966665853 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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