Topic: More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
Today after being met living demands, the community has a tendency to invest their budget in taking care of themselves by taking in more nutritious food and doing sports frequently. This essay will shed light on more details about the reasons behind this trend and potential measures to accelerate these healthy lifestyles.
The first major ground springs from enhancing every aspect of living conditions. Due to the fact that living standards have been improved much more than ever before, thus residents pay much attention to their health and physical appearance. With the aim of keeping a lean body, obviously, they have to hit the gym regularly and adopt balanced diets to maintain good health conditions. In addition, there are a plethora of various advertisements related to physical exercises, which are guided by KOLs such as Emy, and Orange creating inspiration for many people. My sister, for example, these days she spends a great amount of time practicing plank and squat exercises as well as cutting down on processed food thanks to the sharing from her KOLs, Emy on Youtube.
Although people notice much in their health, actions should also be taken strongly as soon as possible to boost positive aspects of this rising trend. First and foremost, physical activities should be integrated into the educational curriculum in order to raise students' awareness the importance of health. Therefore, this approach is likely to encourage students to engage in sports lessons, helping them have an interest in doing exercises. For example, today's educational system in Vietnam has not only introduced many PE courses but also made them become compulsory subjects at schools. Moreover, the government should raise funds and invest more budget in expanding health centers at an affordable price as well as facilitating modern equipment in remote areas. Therefore, people who live on a low income may have a great opportunity to participate in health training activities.
In conclusion, the improved living conditions and the influence of KOLs are the primary reasons behind the increase in having a soft spot for healthy lifestyles. Moreover, as this is a positive trend, measures can be taken to encourage its widespread adoption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27932960894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74286315264 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5885962774 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20837980545 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611089568375 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468561325718 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129111807752 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403495741563 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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