Topic: Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that the government should take responsibility for providing free healthcare and education for its people, while others say that individuals should bear the costs for these services. While personal payments for medical and educational services can improve service quality, I believe that it is better for society if these principal services are completely funded by the government.
On the one hand, if many people can pay for their medical bills or tuitions, the quality of these essential services will be improved. This is because schools and hospitals will have more budget to renovate their facilities, train for their staff and upgrade with modern technology. This will result in a higher quality of service and shorter waiting lists of people who have waited for medical treatments. For example, in Vietnam, people, who have the good financial ability, can go to private hospitals to have an examination immediately without an appointment, they do not have to wait for weeks or months for their turns in public hospitals. However, I believe this approach is only applicable to a small number of rich people in our society.
On the other hand, providing primary education and healthcare services is an obvious obligation of every government. The reason is that individuals pay tax to contribute to the national budget and the government must use this budget to provide necessary public services for its residents. Medical and education cost is unaffordable for many people who are even in the middle class, so that if governments cannot subsidize for these primary services, the poor can not go to school and receive proper healthcare services, resulting in rising poverty and crime in countries. For instance, the University of Oxford recently reported that the crime rate in countries where people could not access free education and medical service is 80% higher than in nations where these services are free. Therefore, subsidizing the healthcare and education system is the best solution to provide well-being for individuals and stabilize society.
In conclusion, although there are some advantages regarding the personal payments for healthcare and education, these services are financial burdens for others and governments should offer medical and education free of charge to all to ensure social equality and develop the countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 702, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...eve this approach is only applicable to a small number of rich people in our society. On the...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l equality and develop the countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40214477212 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79238704533 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501340482574 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.049572996 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6923076923 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328657663258 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128165381396 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747645397588 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224001318763 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694922381118 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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