## Topic: Some people say that art (such as painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas believing that it can be only made by those with special abilities.
### Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is frequently asserted that anyone can learn to become professional in the field of art while others argue that only gifted people can make great achievements in such domains. Undoubtedly, art subjects can be taught and created by the public, but I am of the latter opinion for certain reasons.
In general, art can be introduced to the public as formal education such as music and drawing in most schools. This form of public training cements the belief that children can effectively learn to acquire artistic skills, thus creating artworks. Accordingly, art classes have been organised in various forms and levels, from kindergarten to university, which ultimately aims to provide basic to advanced artists skills. This training mechanism inspires students to nurture hopes, hence, work hard to follow future art careers.
Despite those aforementioned arguments, in my opinion, leading artists must possess innate talents for what they do. Genetically, it is claimed that artist nature runs in the family which means that offspring/ children are more likely to follow their family's footsteps if their parents are artists. Take Mozart as a salient example, since his father was a musical professor, the prodigy earned the gift of musical dexterities from a young age without formal training. Such extraordinary talents facilitated Mozart to excel himself and create many memorable musical masterpieces, hence, played for the royals. Nevertheless, he had also undergone intensive practices beforehand. That is to say without talent, continuous training would either be in vain or unproductive and without hard work, individuals would not learn to push the boundaries of their inherent talent.
In conclusion, people can learn and produce art themselves through proper education and training. However, they need to be gifted to reach an outstanding level in the artist's world.
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- Topic Some people say that art such as painting music poetry can be made by everyone whereas believing that it can be only made by those with special abilities Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, as for, in conclusion, in general, such as, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44368600683 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84195638505 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651877133106 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1538239986 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201201535875 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068894796643 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624591021027 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135033190558 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568822188619 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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