As the news media plays an important active role in our society, this means of communication has various impacts on the public, both in negative and positive ways. However, there are some perspectives against the news media. It is claimed to have bad influences on the way people live today. I strongly agree with some points of view about how the news media drives people’s mind.
The popular claim about the coverage of the news is that it can easily be benefited by anyone with bad purposes. There are many ways to approach the news media through daily paper, television, radio and so forth, on top of all is the Internet. As this worldwide net can easily be accessed by anyone, people can post or read any pieces of information without authenticating them. Unfortunately, bad news travels fast, people somehow believe these groundless biases, and sometimes use it to against genuine sources. Recently, there is a wave of Anti-vaccine which supposed to be originated from the internet, for example. This trend has spread out fears and doubts the government’s health service among parents and has caused a burden to medicine. However, by reading selective sources of news and having administration from the government, one community can protect itself from anonymous news.
On the other hand, the vital role of the news media is undisputed. With its fast and wide characters, the media can quickly deliver messages to citizens in a short period. It is a hugely helpful tool for our society where numerous changes and advanced developments are happening in anytime. People have the way to access newscast easily, they update and enhance social knowledge to connect and catch up with today’s world. In addition, the news media is where people’s voice can be heard, they can express their perspectives about a particular topic to make a better community. As long as they aren’t distracted by the fake information, the news media is still for good common purpose as it was born.
In conclusion, there are always two sides to a story. The news media contribute good value to society if we can control and evaluate well what we read in a day. However, it can be taken advantages for evil purposes if we let it be.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9575596817 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82824552756 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580901856764 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4582809157 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.45 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185245752799 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611075303305 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564201391108 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125290741753 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682230441049 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.