Topic: Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and
poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it
must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is obvious that some people suppose that economic development is the only way to put and end to starvation and poverty. Others, however, believe that the economic growth causes environmental problem, hence, it should be discouraged. Personally, I completely side with the second view.
Firstly, a steady economic growth is a potential solution to deal with the poverty and hunger. The employees, especially lower classics who are living in developing countries with various industries have a tendency of getting more job opportunities. Hence, the poor are more likely to enhance individual’s long-term well-being and meet their basic necessities of life. That is the reason why the profits made by corporations who are responsible for this economic growth will trickle down in the form of financial benefits to be enjoyed by the starving and needy.
On the other hand, there are countless evidences to support the opposing view that environmental destruction is the victim of the development in economic activities. The expanding of urban areas for industrialization results in gradual deforestation.
Besides, lowland rain forests have been cleared and unsustainable agricultural practices introduced to produce cash crops, often for exporting. Moreover, chemical wastes and pollutants from industrial factories are the main causes of environmental pollution. This is leading to a rise in sea level and alarming global warming.
In conclusion, sacrificing the nature for the sake of economic development is not a wise step. And the economic growth which is not sustainable must be stopped.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as for, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21682374692 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3181684129 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242880628757 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817632928589 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866105696465 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133384886778 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872346569072 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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