Topic: Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure that its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe this is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is common for citizens in a modern society that suffer from a series of health problems. Some people believe that the government should shoulder the obligation to ensure its citizens to have healthy diets. Others claim that individuals should take responsibilities for their own healthy diets. I suppose having healthy diets needs efforts both from the government and individuals.
To begin with, we have to admit that the government has the duty to encourage its citizens to have a healthy diet, as it is the administrator of the country. Ensuring that every citizen has a healthy diet needs large investment and long-term efforts, which may be beyond the capacity of private companies. Meanwhile, the government can carry out some policies to encourage citizens to have healthy diets, which may be more persuasive. Moreover, the government can get easy access to media, and the policies can be easily publicized all around the country, which would arouse public awareness of having healthy diets.
At the same time, we should not ignore the efforts of individuals. If every individual can resist the temptation of unhealthy diets, there will be a large step in the country. For instance, people can eat less fast food which contains a huge quantity of oil and calories. Moreover, citizens should learn to balance their diet which is beneficial to their health. For example, they need to eat more fresh vegetables and fruit filled with vitamin C, which is good for people’s health.
Overall, it is necessary for the government to take responsibilities for citizens’ healthy diet. Meanwhile, individuals have the duty to pay more attention to their diets, which have significant effects on their health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...g that every citizen has a healthy diet needs large investment and long-term efforts,...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve significant effects on their health.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i suppose', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239747634069 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.15141955836 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0914826498423 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0283911671924 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0441640378549 0.0437548338989 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0946372239748 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0157728706625 0.0403226058552 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.87033230047 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0473186119874 0.0326793684256 145% => OK
Particles: 0.00315457413249 0.00163938923432 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.0946372239748 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0410094637224 0.021408717616 192% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0252365930599 0.011925033212 212% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1726.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20863309353 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392086330935 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280575539568 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205035971223 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140287769784 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87033230047 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.56093040696 91% => OK
Word variations: 49.9035375862 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5333333333 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8392731517 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.066666667 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.5908872902 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.56338028169 1.69124875643 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420864609721 0.332605444948 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133223454837 0.102741220458 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701412670847 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533636091562 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118842408584 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176384898654 0.134430193775 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10849741957 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381683885156 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0263072752234 0.0638462369009 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299867999918 0.228012699653 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085080869065 0.058150111329 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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