Today, more and more parents depend on their children's grandparents for childcare. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?
Parenthood is important in children’s growth and development. However, we are living in a society where long working hours and heavy financial burdens are pushing parents to leave their kids under the custody of their grandparents. In my own perspective, I still believe that it is an advantage for grandparents to take a part in childcare.
Firstly, we have to admit the necessity of relying on the old generation for childcare. In most families, young parents are usually faced with heavy pressures from work, thus, it is unrealistic for them to take good care of a kid without any help. Quitting their job to be hands-on to their children is not practical in today’s society. With this, they also rely to their parents for their child’s safety and care.
More importantly, both grandchildren and grandparents will benefit from it. Young kids can be looked after carefully without extra costs. Meanwhile, retired people will realize more values and not to desolate themselves by taking care of kids. In addition, the society will also benefit from this, making the elderly, the parents and the youth united.
However, that is not to say we should underestimate the importance of parental care in bringing up a child. Admittedly, parents should also participate in their kids’ growth and inculcate them with the latest and mainstream value in the modern society. Nevertheless, regarding the fact that most of them still have to work, aid from the old generation is also necessary.
In summary, I am personally convinced that it is necessary and beneficial for grandparents to share the responsibility to the childcare of their grandchildren. Yet, parents’ function should never be replaced. In fact, only through the cooperation of both parents and grandparents we can ensure the youth’s memorable childhood as well as their bright tomorrow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for their child's safety and care. More importantly, both grandchildren and...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in summary', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220670391061 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.122905027933 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0865921787709 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0698324022346 0.0501214627716 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0698324022346 0.0437548338989 160% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.120111731844 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0307262569832 0.0403226058552 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10651466009 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335195530726 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.00279329608939 0.00163938923432 170% => OK
Determiners: 0.0754189944134 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223463687151 0.021408717616 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00279329608939 0.011925033212 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1882.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27333333333 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223333333333 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176666666667 0.137316102897 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10651466009 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 57.2225889633 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6470588235 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2336707047 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.705882353 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.6470588235 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.41489361702 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231593803108 0.332605444948 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0886910201256 0.102741220458 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686579804481 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528161457711 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119686726653 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991976213126 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572205588084 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324120728108 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.076270735094 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156261890028 0.228012699653 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504348964112 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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