Topic: These days people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. Causes and problems?
In the contemporary society, one of the most alarming problems perplexing a large number of people is that “throw-away” society could be recently observed through citizen's lifestyle in several nations. In this piece of writing, i would like to elaborate justifications resulting in this tendency and potential repercusions on individuals as well as community.
It is apparent that the phenomenon of inhabitants residing in a “throw-away” society triggered by some contributing factors. As a matter of fact, a wide range of commodities have been manufactured on the market simultaneously coupled with eye-catching commercials and billboards, which are literally succeed in attracting buyers’ attentions. Furthermore, people are currently being accessible to sorts of merchandise as their monthly income increase significantly. Therefore, consumers tend to dispose articles after a short-term utilization and disburse on another one in advance.
However, this tendency might usher in some distinctive consequences on both individuals and society. One of the major issues ascociated with this is that the amount of money which is supposedly for investing on specific fields such as education, healthcare would be expensed extravagantly. As a result, people will not only not obtain comprehensive developments but also waste money and time purchasing gadgets which are not for a long-term purpose. Another detrimental influence is that a colossal amount of toxic garbage particularly plastic waste or scraps would be dumped into environment. Consequently, it would cause the waste treatment to become stagnant on account of disposing excessive and pollute the soil severely.
In conclusion, there are several factors elucidating why inhabitants of some nations live in a “throw-away” society. At the same time, it can lead to adverse impacts on individuals as well as society. Hence, a combined effort from both government and individual is needed so as to mitigate the phenomenon. Only by this way, can we hope to make appropriate decisions in order to address the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66242038217 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44064618469 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2907113705 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.533333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207978400888 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623134981156 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722109539951 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121147126883 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306120764645 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.