These days people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. Causes and problems.
Nowadays, the people’s lifestyle in several countries only use things in a short period or “throw-away”. This is because the price of things are cheap and such stuffs are straightforward to find. The impacts of this issue are increasing number of waste and it is definitely polluting environment.
Affordable price and easy to get some things cause the people tend to use several stuffs in the short time. This phenomena shows that the citizens will be more consumptive and it can influence their life. Yet, this one is method of marketing in business. How to the company provide many stuffs with less quality in order to people buy in the affordable price. For example, in the global south such as majority countries in Southeast Asia dominantly choice rice as main factor to purchase some things. It clearly shows an increase income rapidly in 2022, after pandemic era.
However, the causes will give impacts to the society such as the number of wastes increase exponentially and it will pollute environment. These effects will be more destroy if the people cannot restrict their consumptions. For instance, in the developed countries like France and Germany have tackled this problem. In 1990, these countries have experienced bad condition caused by overload of waste. Such condition made these countries to be the worst in the world.
In conclusion, this habit is caused by affordable price and easy to find, but this one can give negative impacts like inclining the number of rubbish and polluting environment. If it is possible, the all elements should take this idea to be consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10984848485 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84055300799 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3056693335 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227165457556 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741368217195 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102091295206 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135149841456 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765858264538 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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