Topic: They only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the only effective measure to make the traffic safely is imposing harsher punishments on drivers who violate the laws. However, this essay disagrees with this statement because punishing more severely on commuters is only one of the effective solutions and other options such as raising the legal age of drivers or installing speed cameras should be added to reduce traffic accidents.
It is true that strict fines on traffic offenses are necessary to adopt as a deterrent to motorists to disobey the laws. It is because drivers should think twice about the serious consequences if they violate the traffic regulations. They can lose their driving licenses, pay for the heavy fines and go to jail if they commit a driving offense. For instance, driving under the influence of alcohol in Vietnam could be fined up to 30 million VNDs, lose driving licenses and charged up to 10 years in prison. This strict regulation helps to lower the number of alcohol-related accidents in Vietnam by 30% in 2017.
However, the government and local authorities should also look at the other effective measures to increase safety for commuters because it should be better to prevent drivers to commit traffic violations than to punish them. There are many proven methods to reduce the collisions on the roads such as increasing the age of people who can drive or installing speed cameras to control automatically speed limits. Australia has adopted these options successfully from 2010. By raising the legal age to drive to 21 years old and imposing speed cameras on every road, they have reduced the number of traffic accidents by 40% in 2015.
In conclusion, imposing stricter penalties to drivers who disobey the regulations is not the only solution to improve safety on the roads and an integrated approach which is including increasing the legal age of drivers and using speed cameras should be adopted to curb road offenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6703471268 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517133956386 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4778906706 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148339184254 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539228706215 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418804709178 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097878393464 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211921375304 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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