Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flight, transport and dirty water. Governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today`s tourism industry.
It is said that officials should take some steps to confine tourism industry, as it makes some problems, including air and water contamination. One of the solution offered is to impose more taxes on different parts of tourism industry. I disagree with this statement.
We have to consider that it does not matter what type of transportation is used, travelling ultimately can cause pollution. Every year, many tourists decide to go travelling to different cities or countries by planes, trains, buses and even private cars. All modes of transport can contaminate air by fume that they create. Many travelers throw away their rubbish into the nature, such as rivers and jungles irresponsibility. Regardless of the amount of pollution can be made, they cut the plants and the foliage of trees to make fire to enjoy the nature. To decrease the amount of pollution created by tourism, one solution is to restrict this industry. If the tax is imposed based on the travelling distance, many people may become more willing to stay near their hometown. This is because the trip in such situation is not economical for people deciding to go travel. However, this practice is not worth doing when it can negatively affect people's enjoyment.
Tourism also has many benefits for countries. Tourists usually contributes to the economy of the host country, as they are likely to spend money on a wide range of goods and services. In addition to this, tourism industry has an influential role in creation jobs for native people in places, such as hotels, shopping malls and restaurants. Moreover, tourism can help countries to introduce their culture and history to others and reinforce their place in the world. As a result, restriction of tourism to some extent is not reasonable.
In conclusion, in my view, advantages of tourism outweigh its disadvantages, and the pollution created by tourists is not to the extent that the limitation of this industry make a big change for solving problem. I believe that governments can consider other constructive solutions for solving the problems related to pollution, such as improvements of vehicle design, using renewable energies instead of fossil fuels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13407821229 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87270913746 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578212290503 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4109582001 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7368421053 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202751550236 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615056437978 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533928097861 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128792830467 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019479213937 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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