traditional values can be wiped out in modern life.some people think that traditional values can be ripped out because of the development of technology. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
traditions are considered very unique to an idividual socity, although some believe that after tecnological revolution traditions are being undermined, i strongly agree with these people, i will try to explain my point with some relevent examples.
Firstly, the most important outcome of technological advancement is the internet. world wide Web is now easily accessible compared to the old times, moreover mobile phone are the norme in the contemporary socity therefor reinforcing the use of internt sunsequently the exposure to the world is in your grabs through the internt, thereby people get to experince the wast amount of culture's of other regions and forget their tradition. For example in the recent decade, in my country wetern culture is the modren trend, therefor the youth are more indulged in it and forget their own traditional values, moreover they consider their own traditions old fashioned this i my opinion would be catastrophic to our own tradiotion, we should always try to embrace our ancestral believes.
Secondly, televison, another product of the technological escalation. which is now a obligatory device in every house hold. the content in this is mostly in a launguage which is widely accepted so that they could engage a wider range of audience, this centralisation of a single launguage would eventually have its toll over the other, consiquently the native toung would be undermined. for instance kannada is my mother toung, as the youth find the shows in their own mother tongue less entertaining than comparetively to the foreign programmes therefor their own traditional launguage is undervalued.
In conclusion tecnological revolution is no doubt a boon and bane, furthermore the rapid growth of technology in our life is directy ripping our old nad valuble traditions from our life's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02102481242 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.915797029 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.888888889 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132044050254 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496539200385 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424276919017 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868051343547 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369839140417 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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