Art is a form of skill that is admired by many in the contemporary society. Some individuals hold the opinion that art such as painting, poetry, music requires no skill set to create, where as other think it is futile to have special skills and abilities to express art in these forms. This essay shall analyses both perspectives. I personally am in the favor of the second notion.
On the one hand, some believe that it is irrelevant to possess special abilities to create art. This could be contributed to the wild nature of art itself. To exemplify, a famous song which took over the globe few years ago namely "WHY THIS KOLAVERY DI". The background singer and writer of this particular song was not a well known musician to begin with. However, he managed to pull out the music piece of the decade appreciate by many. Not only it was the most creative music of the decade, but also it was done by a person with no musical experience. This shows how art can be volatile in nature, and does not require special skill to create a truly breathtaking piece.
On the other hand, people dedicate an entire lifetime in pursuit of one masterpiece to be created by them. For instance, Picasso a famous painter of 18th century. The entirety of his life was devoted towards art, He was considered as the most skilled artist of all time. Despite him being bad at painting at an early age, he continuously honed his skill to achieve the standards he desired. At the end, he contributed his work to the special skills set he was able to achieve through rigorous efforts.
In conclusion, art is a form of expression. Moreover, there could be myriad ways to express your desires/feelings. However, in my opinion to produce a truly alluring masterpiece that speaks to millions, one has to put in immense effort to achieve the true standards of art.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... music requires no skill set to create, where as other think it is futile to have specia...
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... require special skill to create a truly breathtaking piece. On the other hand...
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...ainting at an early age, he continuously honed his skill to achieve the standards...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69938650307 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68952465144 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1883377745 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6315789474 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28563567346 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815266577272 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904969507527 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166664242319 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670607654977 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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